Sunday 21 June 2015

My story about the net ball

WALT: to add impact 
Success criteria: to write a story about what it is like to be a ball

Netball
I fell someone squeezing me! I start felling myself getting
hire and hire all of a sudden I am in the air of a click of a finger.
Did I say that I love it up here in the cold breeze.


I start to travel to the other end. suddenly I fell something grabbing me 
I am going throw a big round thing everybody says "Go THROW THE HOPE"
everybody says "YES". And the same thing goes all over again. I smash
the edge of the hope. I hear a loud noise and everybody goes away.
"Yay finally it is over now" being a netball isn't so bad after all.

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